We all started somewhere,
I'm always honest and open as you all know (though that's just me--some may not like it that way, but I take-it too).
Tommy 10/10 for trying....1/10 for the layout.
Please don't be disheartened by me saying that, I wish i'd seen it before it was approved...I would have chatted to you beforehand.
I know how it feels to have something you'd created within the release section/net/FMEworld, you need to contact members/layout creators and ask them to look at it 1st. The reasons for that are you can very easily miss the most simple thing and to them it'll stand-out-a-mile.....we ALL do that whatever level you are at...it's nothing to be ashamed of,
Take some time to look at the way classic's are layed-out, you will see a few important things you're missing here.
I'm always here via a PM. I haven't got time to give you 1-2-1 tuition i'm afraid, but with your next one feel free to pass it over and i'll give you some pointers.
Thanks for taking the time in making a layout, it's all downhill for you from now on